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 =  firm
Marius Surleac
[10.Dec.08 17:33]
I like these thoughts of yours - sharp, visual effects, tough, some loss of personality I sense here within the words, strong desire for survival, deep meanings.

Per se sawol' pes!


 =  I perceive this poem...
John Willy Kopperud
[10.Dec.08 21:48] being dark romantic, despair and pain taken to the limit. Well done!
Cheers from Willy

 =  metall-x
dan marius
[11.Dec.08 12:52]
yeap, that's what I say. feed & breed and the rest will follow

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Laurenţiu Ion
[08.Jan.09 12:28]
images are caught up in large dimensions, a silent intervention of your thoughts. well written!

 =  implacably dual
Veronica Valeanu
[21.Feb.09 12:53]
i liked the voice coming from the mirror or perhaps from the consciousness. raising sympathetic, reproachful, and ending up by begging to be fed by the Other - in exchange promising to offer shelter for the refugee. such a devious voice.
power and loss of control at the same time.
half-exterior, half-interior.

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