| = firm|
|I like these thoughts of yours - sharp, visual effects, tough, some loss of personality I sense here within the words, strong desire for survival, deep meanings.|
Per se sawol' pes!
| = I perceive this poem...|
John Willy Kopperud
|...as being dark romantic, despair and pain taken to the limit. Well done!|
Cheers from Willy
| = metall-x|
|yeap, that's what I say. feed & breed and the rest will follow|
| = .|
|images are caught up in large dimensions, a silent intervention of your thoughts. well written!|
| = implacably dual|
|i liked the voice coming from the mirror or perhaps from the consciousness. raising sympathetic, reproachful, and ending up by begging to be fed by the Other - in exchange promising to offer shelter for the refugee. such a devious voice.|
power and loss of control at the same time.