| = ****** | dan marius [16.Jan.09 15:59] |
| "many a stars" from me. there might be a "c" in freedom. one must read it over and over :) | |
| + there is a C# | ion a [17.Jan.09 11:18] |
| nice technique, the colloquial way of laying out an apparently conventional metaphor raid collapses (again apparently) under an onslaught of twists ("sharp blench/ micro jet engine like", "deaf surrender mmmmm") and then the final simply plunging into unknown. is it absurd? irony? precarious incertitude? it’s up to the reader to decide, and that’s perfect, an open ended mystery wrapped in an enigma | |
| = *To conclude | Iwouldntknow [17.Jan.09 19:52] |
| "cartesian" thanks to both of you. :)) (oh, that sounded stuuupid, dee dee!) I hope I can count on your advices from now on too. | |