| = heartbeaten images... | Romulus Campan Maramuresanu [24.Jan.09 22:15] |
| One of those rare texts, which should make in my oppinion the front-page of any poetry paper. So beautiful traces of Romanian "doina", but as small gems only in the blend of psalmic sounds and metapho-descriptive imagery. I just can't believe such an image can be written with words like: "the house steps aside to make place for a cheap street." Dear Florin, this is not flatery, just pure delight and some healthy envy. I've seen every image of each word you wrote. Thank you. | |
| = wonderful :) | Yoanna D [25.Jan.09 12:11] |
| I just love it, it is so alive, it has time and space, humanity and holiness, it is bold and humble, full of images and sounds, pure and wonderful. Best wishes, Ioana. | |
| = Perception of the world... | John Willy Kopperud [25.Jan.09 11:20] |
| ...may be magic, which is the case with this poem, since the images are truly enchanting. Romulus is right, this is outstanding. Nevertheless it is my duty to point out the error in the second last stanza's last line. Which hungs? That verb in present is written HANGS. Please correct it. Cheers from Willy | |
| = thank you all | florin caragiu [25.Jan.09 14:10] |
| Romulus: thank you very much for the appreciation, i'm glad you found in this little poem so many things... Yoanna: you are welcome, thanks for the nice words. Willy: thank you for making me aware of the mistake, I did the necessary correction. I am honored by your presence here, thank you for the encouraging words... | |
| = And... | John Willy Kopperud [25.Jan.09 15:02] |
| ...you're on the list! Cheers from Willy | |
| = * | Laurenþiu Ion [26.Jan.09 15:13] |
| children are ready to leap with a cry into the memory holes; a daydream is enough to turn round the whole machinery which hangs on my last piece of sun. when I'll have the necessary access level, I'll return and give to this poem a so deserved star. | |
| = please Diana... | Romulus Campan Maramuresanu [27.Jan.09 02:35] |
| Diana, You lack a verb and used a word unworthy of a poetry com. Please refrain. You may express yourself freely, with respect nevertheless for others' sensitivity... | |
| = thank you | florin caragiu [30.Jan.09 17:48] |
| Thank you all. I'm glad zou enjoyed the poem, Laurenţiu, you are welcome. | |