| = . | Laurenþiu Ion [30.Jan.09 23:12] |
| the whole feel of this poem is consistent to me and it has an ethereal quality. I liked it | |
| = . | Diana Todea [31.Jan.09 11:47] |
| Thank you, Laurentiu. I ment it to be a whole. Cheers, Diana. | |
| = poetry becomes prose | Veronica Valeanu [17.Feb.09 09:59] |
| "man lives forever on the sacred ground" a good poem here. I also like the deceleration you applied to some intensity levels/mom. of speech, while in others you engaged in acceleration. it made me think about the opposition poetry//prose. "sacred ground" is the point where you made them fuse. poetry that no longer can bear itself and becomes prose is such a refined way of rendering Hamlet's climax of drama, despair. the finishing stroke, so good. best regards, Veronica | |
| = intent | Diana Todea [24.Feb.09 19:52] |
| I'm glad that my intent was clear and you liked it. Best regards! | |