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Marius Surleac
[21.Feb.09 20:20]
"golgothically" - poetic license?

"wordly"? - maybe "wordy"
= please frown a little now and then
Veronica Valeanu
[21.Feb.09 22:49]
"golgothically" stays.
"worldly" .
and it was "mourn" for the other poem.
thank you so much for alerting me. why didn't I see that?
also thank you for watching attentively the slightest step that I take. it feels so nice being here, with so many caring eyes around.

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= .	Marius Surleac [21.Feb.09 20:20]
"golgothically" - poetic license? "wordly"? - maybe "wordy"

= please frown a little now and then	Veronica Valeanu [21.Feb.09 22:49]
"golgothically" stays. "worldly" . and it was "mourn" for the other poem. thank you so much for alerting me. why didn't I see that? also thank you for watching attentively the slightest step that I take. it feels so nice being here, with so many caring eyes around.