| = 4 dimensions | Veronica Valeanu [25.Feb.09 20:54] |
| *whether instead of weather i suggest a change for the title: "a question of waves" rather than "for" - the meaning would emphasize the powerful image of the Oneness. i enjoyed the way you attenuated the reader's /and also your impact upon the finding of the Being (roundness)- like dropping the words in water and creating concentric vibrations... water, skyes, earth and the spiritual bond between a man and a woman... such a good poem | |
| = veronica | Horia Mocanu [25.Feb.09 21:18] |
| thanks a lot for the visit and the kind words. i didn't catch that mistake. your suggestion is good i applied it. my poetry is translated from Romanian an my translation is not always the best possible one. | |
| = veronica | Horia Mocanu [25.Feb.09 21:19] |
| thanks a lot for the visit and the kind words. i didn't catch that mistake. your suggestion is good i applied it. my poetry is translated from Romanian an my translation is not always the best possible one. | |