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= Gunsel!
John Willy Kopperud
[25.May.09 21:19]
The moon WAS playing hide and seek. It WAS you. Without those
two errors this is quite a charming poem. If you revise, I'm sure your text will be approved.
Cheers from Willy
= After the necessary revision...
John Willy Kopperud
[30.May.09 18:10]
...I find that it's good!
Cheers from Willy

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= Gunsel!	John Willy Kopperud [25.May.09 21:19]
The moon WAS playing hide and seek. It WAS you. Without those two errors this is quite a charming poem. If you revise, I'm sure your text will be approved. Cheers from Willy

= After the necessary revision...	John Willy Kopperud [30.May.09 18:10]
...I find that it's good! Cheers from Willy