| = Ela, elle l'a | Florin Hulubei [28.Jun.06 09:49] |
| so just let me write on a tear of angel a neverending light - quiet plastic, I would say. Nice to read you in English too! | |
| = error | Florin Hulubei [28.Jun.06 09:51] |
| Sorry, I wanted to say "quite plastic" | |
| = I think | Motoc Lavinia [29.Jun.06 20:52] |
| yes, quite a strong ending to your poem. unfortunately it minimizes the rest a little bit. | |
| = Essence | Simona-Maria Stanciu [30.Jun.06 14:07] |
| You without you, ironic waves of living, a neverending light. The poetry refects everything. | |
| = thank you | Ela Victoria Luca [10.Jul.06 21:40] |
| Florin, glad to meet you here, on my english page. Quit plastc and quit tender in my internal mood. :) Lavinia, I tried to describe the spaces in-between perceptions. Is not so easy. Thank you. Simona, sometimes we need this neverending light, for living behind all kind of waves. To be strong enough to survive. Thank you for your sign. Ela | |
| = Congratulations! | Marius Surleac [18.Feb.08 13:23] |
| Yes, two are enough for that single pain, just if those two are together and the feelings are felt by both-sides. So, you choose not to use the "center" because both are on different sides and if will concern your idea on the center, suddenly will start the motion of everything ... is like an entropy of feelings (get them in the center and will explode in thousand of pieces and aspects). Also, you have to be careful with the "neverending light", because the "always dark" can easily absorb it. Finally, I contradict the opinions before mine, saying that is not quite at all plastic, but fluid (ex. waves, neverending, tears, light) ... it all flows fluidity. Very good poem! | |