Members comments:

 =  clean and stout
felix nicolau
[03.Jul.06 23:45]
well-balanced, sensitive and graciously, profoundly built end of the story.

 =  Telluric & cosmic
Edilberto González Trejos
[13.Jul.06 14:29]
This text has the echo of telluric eternity and cosmic passing within.

Songo

 =  Thanks
Alexandra Maria Velianu
[15.Jul.06 12:22]
Thank you. I was indeed thinking about the meaning of the world ans its ciclicity when I wrote it.

Ada

 =  Lost in the whirl of time
Elies
[03.Aug.06 19:15]
Beautifully composed and truly moving as the echoe of a soul trapped in the whirl of centuries and in the material world, yearning for more... But the final word opens the prayer on a eternal and neverfulfilled perspective...

 =  I like it!
Cris V
[09.Oct.06 23:23]
It sounds as if there are so many layers of emotions wrapped around the stone, but still so tranquil and meditative




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