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= Please comment on this and the one before... sometimes one cannot be impersonal
Sydney Krivenko
[27.Feb.07 20:05]
Luminita, I tried, but as it is an erotic poem, I do not like this impersonal version... still, I am taking your advice in other works.Please let me know your opinion on the last two poems! Thanks, Sydney
= put your lights on
felix nicolau
[27.Feb.07 22:45]
this liquid sweeping using light has something of indian summer in it.

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= Please comment on this and the one before... sometimes one cannot be impersonal	Sydney Krivenko [27.Feb.07 20:05]
Luminita, I tried, but as it is an erotic poem, I do not like this impersonal version... still, I am taking your advice in other works.Please let me know your opinion on the last two poems! Thanks, Sydney

= put your lights on	felix nicolau [27.Feb.07 22:45]
this liquid sweeping using light has something of indian summer in it.