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= please revise...
Romulus Campan Maramuresanu
[22.May.07 06:54]
"he cough" must be "he coughs" in the context. Please revise.

= i'll change it into he'd cough
Carp Bogdan
[22.May.07 21:38]
Tenq, indeed.
= some more...
Romulus Campan Maramuresanu
[22.May.07 21:37]
book shelfs - bookshelves
happyness - happiness
cryes - cries

Please do a spell check before you post your poetry.

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= i've changed the text
Carp Bogdan
[24.May.07 15:48]
tq again

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= please revise...	Romulus Campan Maramuresanu [22.May.07 06:54]
"he cough" must be "he coughs" in the context. Please revise.

= i'll change it into he'd cough	Carp Bogdan [22.May.07 21:38]
Tenq, indeed.

= some more...	Romulus Campan Maramuresanu [22.May.07 21:37]
book shelfs - bookshelves happyness - happiness cryes - cries Please do a spell check before you post your poetry. Success.

= i've changed the text	Carp Bogdan [24.May.07 15:48]
tq again