| = i think|
|you'll only be in love,|
mortal and afraid...
besides the fact that it sound impressive, i think its the best way to put it in words. It descibes my vision and feelings quite accurate
| = inlove and yet afraid?|
|I think you meant to say "when a hand's touch speeks", either than that I see no spelling mistakes.|
"you'll only be inlove,/mortal and afraid..."
Yet love is what elevates the spirit, what brings it closer to Perfection. I do not see how a spirit inlove can still be afraid...Perhaps you can explain this contrast.
| = late answer|
Ravendark Scar Furiel
|like autumn leaves that fade away|
on moonlit fields where cool winds stray
speech overcame us leading blood astray
survive who will the word that leads the way