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 =  nice
ion amariutei
[24.Nov.03 19:50]
i think the english version actually sounds better, conveying a greater sense of longing, of unfulfilled desire

 =  The holy spirit
Olteanu Irina
[25.Nov.03 10:48]
Disappointment indeed. But a religious one.

 =  Ion and Irina
Neisa Conta
[25.Nov.03 11:41]
Ion, I guess the English version sounds better because it's the original and only one!
:))
I actually find it much easier to write poetry dedicated to a certain language, instead of translating. Which can be very disappointing for certain poems!

Irina, I guess at some level TRUELY disappointment HAS to be religious...
:)

Thank you both for visiting me.




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