| = opinion | Anca Veronica Anghel [29.Nov.03 13:23] |
| Your poem is very hard to read. I just wonder about your incoherence in all the poems that you already posted. That "pixilated" maybe is "pixilated". I am really not sure about this word. | |
| = ... | Adrian Boariu [02.Dec.03 22:37] |
| Why is it hard to read?Maybe it is hard to comprehend, not everyone can understand Aesop Rock... oh and it is "pixelated" (pixel) | |
| = well, maybe just hours...hehe | jennifer dagrosa [24.Dec.03 02:30] |
| I think its beautiful in a modern kinda way. Whoever this is, I could listen to him talk for hours...days. | |
| = Zappology | Mihai Popeti [24.Dec.03 02:30] |
| I think the text has a good 'flow' if that is what the above accusation is all about. It isn't hard to comprehend either, mainly because it is part of our everyday life and the battles it delivers (or fails to deliver) to our consciousness... I don't know if it is right to do so, but I'll add the 'Frank Zappa' answer: I'm The Slime by Frank Zappa I am gross and perverted I'm obsessed 'n deranged I have existed for years But very little had changed I am the tool of the Government And industry too For I am destined to rule And regulate you I may be vile and pernicious But you can't look away I make you think I'm delicious With the stuff that I say I am the best you can get Have you guessed me yet? I am the slime oozin' out From your TV set You will obey me while I lead you And eat the garbage that I feed you Until the day that we don't need you Don't got for help...no one will heed you Your mind is totally controlled It has been stuffed into my mold And you will do as you are told Until the rights to you are sold That's right, folks.. Don't touch that dial Well, I am the slime from your video Oozin' along on your livin'room floor I am the slime from your video Can't stop the slime, people, lookit me go | |
| = \m/ \m/ | aeryca stokes [17.Jan.04 00:55] |
| I think Aesop Rock is the most progressive of all hiphop artists/poets out in NY today! I love all of his work & hopes he continues to bring everything he's got! :::WERD::: I loved this poem! | |