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= please
Anca Veronica Anghel
[17.Dec.03 15:55]
"of Testerdays without Tomorrow" - should be "yesterday " ?
"sounless on the Land..." - "soundless"
"of Pure spark;ing Vanity,"- "sparking"
"os Shadows from so far Beneath"- " of Shadows..."

Please make the changes before this poem will show on the web.

Thank you.

= Sorry!
Constantinescu Eugen
[18.Dec.03 07:09]
Sorry!
I was on the rush...
Thank you!
Eugen
= lovely
Lauren Perazza
[18.Dec.03 23:32]
I personally think this is awondeful poem, and that the rhymes were very nice.

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= please	Anca Veronica Anghel [17.Dec.03 15:55]
"of Testerdays without Tomorrow" - should be "yesterday " ? "sounless on the Land..." - "soundless" "of Pure spark;ing Vanity,"- "sparking" "os Shadows from so far Beneath"- " of Shadows..." Please make the changes before this poem will show on the web. Thank you.

= Sorry!	Constantinescu Eugen [18.Dec.03 07:09]
Sorry! I was on the rush... Thank you! Eugen

= lovely	Lauren Perazza [18.Dec.03 23:32]
I personally think this is awondeful poem, and that the rhymes were very nice.