= "two stars" from peruzele | Elena Malec [22.Apr.04 02:01] |
Eugen, I've read your poem with interest. It is indeed nice, but you know what? You can make it be great! The way these electronic forms are set give one a headache; I'm not sure you noticed the second verse. Was this supposed to be "the smell of rotten corpses those decay"? Okay, that's all for today; If you ask me, I enjoyed, anyway. | |