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Sweet, but sadly conventional.
It's coherent, no big flaws...
A fine tribute to a great musician, Marius, however...
Mask, teeth, whatever, Monica...
Comprende, Feilx...
Edilberto, thanks a lot and you know...
A toast, Marius...
I really appreciate...
Thanks a lot, Corina!
Felix, in what way...
Just leave me with... ( )
Time and space...
And so...
I see you rhyme as good... ( )
Clouds clotted in wartime and a splendid finale... ( )
P.S...
Indeed, Felix...
Enjoyable imagery...
I accept this now as a Haiku...
I perceive this...
Someties stereotypes are...
Dan Marius...
Something almost hypnotic...
A profound change, Monica... ( )
Monica...
The city yes, but for me, especially...
Thanks a lot, Corina! In addition...
The mood of the season...
Melancholia...
Alas...
I liek this idea too, Chris, though...
Splendid Cabernet cabaret....
As a comment to this...
Good to hear, Corina...
Of course it is invented, Marius...
Those darned birds!
A good piece of poetry...
Holding the reader as well as...
A title that reminds me of...
So sweet, yet not at all sentimental.. ( )
Some errors here:
The feline animal playing...
Taking me back...
Grammar/syntax is a lot better now...
The bus is...
Enjoyable wordplay...
Please; no longer can she see me...
The succession of words in English is...
Exploring the various facets... ( )
Wise words
You're so right
Thank you Corina!
Please...
A toast...
Some poems seem...
A small and very well-shaped silent movie... ( )
In very short poems...
Anonymity, blankness, the mask...
I enjoyed this...
The wind, the rain, the growth
...Mike and Chris!
The ever unfolding drama...
Why did I start imagining...
There you go again...
A plant for sure, Marius, but also... ( )
One often wonders...
Most amusing... ( )
Your alterations do improve...
I second...
I can't help but... ( )
Thanks a lot, Gradinaru...
Let's try again.
I'm not save?
Interesting elaboration...
Certainly a fine notion, but...
It takes a lot to cross certain bridges...
CONGRATULATIONS!
Well, then...
Simply loved this one...
That's right, Felix!
I try to observe...
Derrida, being one of the most influential...
A fair warning to those... ( )
It's not that...
I like the last...
I appreciate the objectification...
Through The Looking-glass!
Intriguing really, but...
A well-composed...
Thank you very much...
Wrong section
Simple and striking... ( )
The explanation of a title and three lines
As a matter of circumstance... ( )
That's an interesting approach!
Wrong section
Wrong section
Flyerers have to get an income too...
This poem describes...
=pposites...
I correct myself...
When yo're unable to distuinguish between dream and reality... ( )
A good elaboration on love...
The archaic English you use here...
This is difficult to take in...
In the words of a norwegian song title...
Expressive poem worth reading....
The letter format works for me as a reader...
And there...
Maria-Mihaela, I do agree!
Fine and intersting work. though I find some grammaticl flaws...
I know, and that....
I do think I may approve this one...
I do think I may approve this one...
Utterly unneccesary...
Sea, sunrise, heaven...
GIVE away...
P.S.
I read this is a vivid depiction...
What is your poetic intent...
Congratulations!
The "I" person's own life reflected through... ( )
"We know major Tom's a junkie"...
Some moments...
...The cab, the train...
My dictionary is called Longman's and there...
Marius, I still think I disagree...
One...
Sweet...
Real nice short poem...
Violence in animated movies...
A real nice flow...
Dan Marius, whar you have achieved here...
Ecaterina, Radovan is...
Marius, I see... ( )
I can't say it's appetizing...
Indeed, Simona...
On a monday, the best moment to smile...
In poetry...
Close and personal observation...
Fine images and a good story, just...
Simplicity does it...
A wee bit more to be done
Setting sail...
Brings to mind some words... ( )
Horror, is it...
Errors:
My impression...
Thank you very much, Daniela...
If I may...
Unseen colors yet unborn ( )
To the distributor of the red star...
Dan Marius and Marius!
Ah! In that case I'd suggest...
Marius, this is a brilliant idea!
Seemingly a realistic depiction of family holidays until... ( )
Corina
+
Corina
Makes me...
Man, seemingly bound...
Intimate and well shaped...
Interesting approach, but...
No bad idea,but...
I've heard of...
I think maybe...
I hear and listen...
Short., open...
To be quite precise...
No verse enough?
Short and...
Flawless in syntax and grammar... ( )
Fulfilling haiku here, Marius! ( )
Very well...
Sophisticated use of symbols...
(Laughter....) But really, thanks a lot, Chris...
Victorianism...
A great journey through...
Visions of community..
I enjoyed the alliteration in this one...
Short poem...
Indeed it's true...
All right, but...
Splendid images... ( )
One fine...
Thanks a lot, Sorin!
A new approach to the term "Personal Computer"...
When someone succeds in writing a poem, the finishing touch...
An illustrious description...
An open door...
A politician(Mr. C?), a crimininal, both....
I second all of Marius' words here....
"Arts Masterpieces" ...
Now, that's more like poetry....
Here I find no good rhytm, no original images, no nice rhymes...
Quite a thrilling futuristic dysptophy...
This poem keeps popping up....
A BBC program about Leonardos "Last Supper"...
After (quite?) a bit of guidance...
I join in the praise...
Here vampirism may be perceived...
Haunting images of captivity...
A good and sensitive depiction...
Much better than the other one that...
As we all are human...
That's action... ( )
I wonder...
When you're strange...
Ach, harmony, harmony...
Why don't we all set sail...
The languages seem to mix up...
A splendid...
This is very much to my liking ( )
Concise and well-shaped, Chris!
Absolutely a valid solution...
The reason why you should revise this, Ionut...
Also very eloquent in classical style...
You keep delivering good poems, Lee Ann...
Thank you, Ionut... ( )
Quite open to various interpretations...
A perfect comparison...
Some exquisite images and rhymes here...
Read this one just now...
Constantin, how nice...
One complaint here
Life and death...
Sounds to me as a blend of...
Coming from that painters own city... ( )
You found very good solutions...
A story told...
Lee Ann!
By all means...
Poetry as a tool...
You are obviously...
Congratulations, Bogdan! (of course, sorry!)...
And the question is...
That rite... ( )
It would be suitable...
Oops, forgot to put you ...
"My past has never been better/than this....
Some very nice classical images there, Marius...
That day has come, Syd!
One reason...
Nature employed...
My opinion about this poem is just about the same...
Welcome back from your absence, Syd!
I absolutely agree with...
So true...
Romanian essence....
Part time love...
Real nice one, Marius...
Amigo!
Glad you liked it, Vicleanu...
Hardly understandable poem...
All the things we are...
Your poem reflects...
Not badly written this fantasy scenario...
Intriguing...
Short and concise...
Well composed...
Yes!
Verschiedene languages, bueno!
Silly me...
Please explain to me...
Too many errors
The blockheads escape my comment...
I appreciate that, Marius...
Urban filth and ...
In through the open window...
I guess you must be a bit educated...
Hardly about football...
Definition of clair obscure from The Free Dictionary: ( )
Thank you, Chris...
More compact...
I sense...
This poem is balanced...
Very visual poetry with a temperament...
This prose piece...
I thank God for the fact that one text may...
Important question, Chris.
Interesting biblical allusions...
It does feel good...
That worldly yellow star...
Compressed existential surrealism...
Let me welcome you to the site, too, and...
Cheers, Marius...
It's a pleasure...
Again; Marius, not really a Haiku...
As far as I know the Haiku set of rules...
To the above I need to add...
And now it seems...
And finally...
Now this really works...
Funny...
Irene certainly has a point and..
Containing exquisite, concrete images..
This poem has potential...
Lost patterns...
Doing the "Severed Head".... ( )
Floyd at the flat...
Written with a sense of humor...
As a glimpse of intense youthful mourning - the absence...
Not bad, Irene, but...
Not bad, Irene, but...
Syd Barret...
Natures beauty and...
Irony in this poem...
Ode to a question...
Yes, Bogdan, ignorance...
Beautiful alliteration... ( )
Love is God's intention...
Awaiting the miracle...
Chris, we ride the images...
Thanks a lot, Marius!
It seems clear... ( )
Interesting classical allusions...
Peace in the valley.
Ah, those sepia-colored frames depicting faces...
Art, sensitivity...
Yeah!
There's musicality within this poem...
Chris, the responses on this one delights me!
Thanks a lot, Mike. You really hit the spot...
Thanks a lot for your response, Marius!
And.. ( )
Marius is right regarding surrealism....
Bogdan!
The reason why I put this one on the list is...
Now, here's a bit of drama...
Yes, I know...
And..
Oops, misspelling -
Welcoming the new kids in town.
I lke this, many fine images and good rhytm...
One fine newcomer!
A dreamy sadness...
Luckily the laws have changed in Britain...
Really it's perfection that I fear, because...
Couldn't avoid....
This text is written in better english than the one I wanted revised...
Humanism?
With these additions...
...Sorry, but I don't really see...
...Sorry, but I don't really see...
whispers through our forests dense with fog and deep... ( )
I find it hard to disagree...
Very good idea, but then again we have to deal with...
Looking forward...
I appreciate the imperative emotion you put forth here...
Me, I just love Pinocchio...
Lifted up
I like this too...
In addition to the funny point you make...
Political lies lead to war and large accounts...
Some believers, Ion...
Let me add; sophistication=
Fine, concise...
Going for enlightenment, Maspros?
Taking to the air...
Exactly, Marius!
Fine, original idea....
I know, Dan...
I know, Dan...
I guess we won't agree in this case, Marius...
Pig Power! ( )
I certainly agree... ( )
Beauty and genocide...
Generalizations, Dan...
Interesting elaboration...
Dan!
As a matter of fact...
Good writing, fine images, but please...
An interesting poetic elaboration...
Is this about an individuals remorse...
And these weapons cost a lot more...
The magic...
Suggestion
Excuse me...
Nice writing with good rhytm and images, just...
Love is all there is...
Amigo, mankind is caught between collectivist states, like China...
I suggest, Daniel...
Venturing into the surreal, Marius...
Silver bullets,,,
Thanks a lot, Sydney!
One way of reading this...
Why, indeed is Sydney Krivenko now without her former...
Why, indeed is Sydney Krivenko now without her former...
Sometimes we really...
A valid musicality in your poem here, Marius...
Opens up for...
Please...
A bit confusing...
Hopefully a candle will always remain lit...
Expressive yes...
One cutting example...
Maybe a bit too much...
This does not refer to race...
Please...
Musicality...
Ah, that's potential!
That part of spiritual existence... ( )
A soft whisper...
Surreal, yet concrete...
Such a refined contribution... ( )
Please don't let me be misunderstood!
Thank you for correcting that error and thus making ...
There is certainlys some good content her, but...
Interesting, romantic and metaphysical...
Greetings from (Peace and)Love Street...
What a nice, spantaneous response, Chris!
Thanks a lot, Chris! The great inventions and the myths...
....if dead stars dance ( )
....if dead stars dance
...book of life
Precise and lighthearted
Thank you very much for enlightening me concerning...
Indeed; "one waxdripping arm rose", Marius, and...
Strikers...
The mind and the senses...
Interesting content, but in need of some revision
For the larger part, I strongly support Ions wievs above...
Showing originality....
Creationism and 1984
So kind of you, Marius...
Hey!
Hey!
Edilberto, how nice...
Syd!
Marius might be...
Heartwarming...
Thanks, Christopher!
Thanks, Luminita!
If the city has a river...
A valid expression... ( )
Reason
Work might be the solution
Ode to illusion ( )
No stop signs as to technical solution!
Them bones
Reminds me of... ( )
On the very spot, Marius!
When the feeling gets through...
I like the way you,ve pieced this one together, Marius..
As I see it Marius...
Simplicity...
Email must be made functional
Dynamo
- the birds are flying through us without the slightest suspicion
Loved that cryptosaurus, Felix
Felix, I read this just now,,,
The secret sacrifice of rubber and flesh
Saxonisms and nonsense
Unslept dreams...
Here you come through to me...
Sorry, Joshua, you'll have to do better...
This contains hope...
Happy New Year, Camelia!
I really did enjoy this, Sydney!
Yes...
Q
I see it clearly now...
Art at the subway station
Power and Horror
Love and mercy
The veil and the wheel
The veil and the wheel
Suurealism as delivered by Felix
The symmetry of spades
Intensity
Edilberto!
Good and somber
Good and somber
What you offer
This vast universe
Somehow
Correction
Carl Michael Bellman
Underneath the face value
These not so appetizing processes
Thanks for reminding me about El Greco!
Using the Canvas
Identity, concepts of reality, illusion and the self
Just one little...
Misspellings
Language
John B.
It goes with the flow
Articles
Emilia!
Striking, Felix!
Precisely so
Christmas 1991
When you start looking
Citizen!
Beautiful simplicity
King James Bible ,Job, Chapter 42, 12-13
The Marketplace
Whalehug
Keep up the good work!
Thanks, Felix and Edilberto !
Thank you for your generous response
Hola, Edilberto!
Well written, learned and highly interesting!
Unsentimental approach
Magnificence
Interesting to an outsider
Somber Skyline
Packed with significance
Mistaken
Walking through fire
Romulus!
That sleepy watch
That sleepy watch
Put your whalesuit on
I thank you, my readers!
Water
Scratch my steel inforcements
Shellborne dreams
The original American spirit
Dysfunctional Harmony
Romulus!
A bout of shamanism
Loneliness
Hola, Edilberto!
Romulus!
From all of me to all of you
...I do sense the necessity of expressing it this way.
Response to Dan, Ion and Sydney
Words
Summer Holiday
Another side of Sydney
Natural things
Two sides of a perfect coin.
More to come
Bashô?
Pain, fire and love
Feed the birds, tuppence a bag.
Starry, starry night
Lunacy or "Lunacy"?
Rare, medium,and...
Tom Waitz...
Enjoy your weekend, Monica!
Felix! I wish you a most pleasant weekend!
Speedy response
Yeah, people, drop out of the rat race!
Camelia
Thanks, Sydney and Edilberto and my special regards to Dan and Romulus!
Resigned
on the British box
Keep writing, Dan, I know you're capable.
Her horrible dark nipple
Proud of having you as my translator
The crossing
About the pollution of Narnian soil
Ah, Beautiful Elevator
No shuteye
Going forth...
Solidarity!
Very last suggestion
(Sign)ificant
Deviant? From what?
It happens a bit faster than the contributions, doesn't it?
Please...
Allow me...
If he cries then let him go
The art of no nonsense
Making sense?
Passenger K.
Is that Mr. Beckett knocking on the door?
Ion and Camelia!
Body and Soul
Terror?
Water of Gods
And a merry Easter to you, too!
requiem (for horn and lute)
Long Cut
ask the
I Loved You
Aspider in the middle of the night
The ruins that matter
Stuff
Coming ashore
Waking up
Coming Ashore
Coming Ashore
The Rite of Spring
Waking up
the clerks' ball
Numbness
Astonished Eye Facing the Mirror
womanhood
Icarus
womanhoood
womanhoood
Romart
Evening
The Meeting
The Meeting
Fat dogs, thin dogs
ivory towers
ivory towers
Farinelli
(Nr.3) Farinelli
no timing
no timing
A white helmet and a child in the rain
Now=Just a Sec
Where are those who are mot Anymore?
To Hang by Reflection
To Hang by Reflection
Words
THE OTHER
You knew how to measure
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The Chimney sweeper
Poetry by William Blake
Fragment 52
Poetry by Sappho
You've got to hide your love away
Poetry by JOHN LENNON
Jabberwocky
Poetry by lewis carroll
Berket and the Stars
Poetry by William Carlos Williams
With God on our side
Poetry by Robert Allen Zimmerman
It seems so long ago
Poetry by Leonard Cohen
Howl
Poetry by Allen Ginsberg Alternative version
It's all over now, baby blue
Poetry by Robert Allen Zimmerman
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Biography John Willy Kopperud
First years spent in various towns surrounding the Oslo fiord. Grew up in a suburb east of the city, both near to and withdrawn from my numerous peers. Significantly radicalized at the age of fourteen. Grew disappointed with the revolution and signed up for the magical mystery autumn 69. Radicalized once more. Dropped out once more. Fairly well educated during the 80's and 90's.
Poetry? Off and on, I'd say. Besides poems I have weitten both pop lyrics (plus lyrics for contemporary music)and short stories. What moves me? Imagination I guess. Imagination should not contradict everyday life (and the other way around.)
I must hold forth that good old Willie S. has quite a point when he gives fair warning regarding "The man who hath no music in himself."
Music? I have mentioned pop lyrics - to be more precise - most of these are connected to the singer/songwriter tradition. Concrete and melodious music. I have also been active in another musical area,
in the crossroad between music and noise. This is not academic sheet-music, it's rather built on improvisation and momentary exploration. Later on the product has been technically modified. Roar Borge My accomplice in the project "Fisk på Disc" available with the MP3 Album "School of fish'n'chips" through the net-distrubutor, TibProd. He has done the producing in his home studio on his own computer. The album is no. 53 in the companys catalogue and the address is : http://www.tibprod.com.
Ten tracks on the net for you to download. Be my guests!
My wife, Kristin, is responsible for some very nice poetic lyrics. For some of that material I have written
pop/singer-songwriter music.
Married to my life companion at the age of 33.One child. We live in a suburb some six kilometers from where I grew up.
Career: No big deal. Life: Good. Hardships: Yes
Happiness: Yes.
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