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I strongly recommend you to / Veronica Văleanu
Welcome, Carmen!
I strongly agree with the idea that a little bit of science makes the perfect in
on "Triangle of life",
Poetry by Carmen Codreanu
milk and honey / Dely Cristian Marian
It has that thing that arouses the curiosity. (I've been chasing after your heroes in my mind, as th
on "Legend",
Poetry by Bodea Diana Mihaela
tongue / Dely Cristian Marian
Quite interesting; this poetry is really into arguing... for the sake of a mighty pair perhaps.
It
on "For the sake or argument",
Poetry by Bodea Diana Mihaela
< comments > / Corina Gina Papouis
The rhythm of this poem is broken thus the poem doesn't flow.
It could be easily corrected.
Rega
on "Legend",
Poetry by Bodea Diana Mihaela
< comments > / Bodea Diana Mihaela
Ok, thank you. I will try to reshape it.
on "Time and Ego",
Poetry by Bodea Diana Mihaela
< comments > / Corina Gina Papouis
This poem does not sustain any rhythm, rhyme or white verse. It does not do any favours to the reade
on "Time and Ego",
Poetry by Bodea Diana Mihaela
open your eyes, they are still there / raj thampi
Sounds like there was a serious eye infection. TEodory , don't worry, eye will not fly away. Instea
on "I fly so high ",
Poetry by Teodoru Cora-Eliana
the spirit... / Romulus Campan
Your spirit of understanding is being appreciated, looking forward to your "turns"!
With friendly
on "A man with a plan",
Poetry by Petre Stefan Tiberiu
clarification / Petre Stefan Tiberiu
My initial intention was to portray raw authority in a simplistic and yet definitory way. But I gues
on "A man with a plan",
Poetry by Petre Stefan Tiberiu
standards... / Romulus Campan
My dear Petre Stefan,
Regardless of how much I tried to stretch my standards for accepting this a
on "A man with a plan",
Poetry by Petre Stefan Tiberiu
grammar... / Romulus Campan
Please reconsider for grammar problems...
rc
on "Questions about Life",
Poetry by Bodea Diana Mihaela
grammar... / Romulus Campan Maramuresanu
Please reconsider for grammar and syntax inconsistencies.
rcm
on "Legend",
Poetry by Bodea Diana Mihaela
not so simple... / Romulus Campan Maramuresanu
Hi Marilena,
I couldn't help noticing the lengthy gap between your last text and this one...
You
on "Simply thoughts",
Poetry by Niculae Marilena
< comments > / Veronica Văleanu
I tried myself, and it works. Perhaps you should take more patience with your computer.
on "I call you Hope",
Personals by Ioana-Raluca Raducanu
Thank you / Ioana-Raluca Raducanu
so much, but this is exactly the reason I am writting, this option is not working.
on "I call you Hope",
Personals by Ioana-Raluca Raducanu
< comments > / Veronica Văleanu
yes, of course.
right below the text there is a case: [this is your text. you can edit this text]
on "I call you Hope",
Personals by Ioana-Raluca Raducanu
help / Ioana-Raluca Raducanu
hello:) i have a problem editing this text, may I please get some help?
on "I call you Hope",
Personals by Ioana-Raluca Raducanu
< comments > / Veronica Văleanu
getting the message across
on "It 's still summer 2",
Poetry by Anni- Lorei Mainka
< comments > / Veronica Văleanu
you aren't disturbing anyone
it's not outrageous to be in the situation of having extraordinary t
on "It 's still summer 2",
Poetry by Anni- Lorei Mainka
sorry to disturbe you / Anni- Lorei Mainka
Yes, you decide here, and it is right so.
But in more than one way it is still a difficult situatio
on "It 's still summer 2",
Poetry by Anni- Lorei Mainka
look... / Anni- Lorei Mainka
My final verses are for me so short and explain exactly what I want.
The change at the beginning -
on "It ' s still summer 1",
Poetry by Anni- Lorei Mainka
thks / Anni- Lorei Mainka
You're so nice to tell me what you ve seen:
I've written "the autumn's doors", because it's a sp
on "It 's still summer 2",
Poetry by Anni- Lorei Mainka
< comments > / Veronica Văleanu
[when playing, we won't be able to hear the soldiers' steps] instead of [playing, we'll can't hear t
on "It ' s still summer 1",
Poetry by Anni- Lorei Mainka
< comments > / Veronica Văleanu
[autumn's door] instead of [the autumn's doors]
[will be] instead of [we'll be]
[mind]
[bones]
on "It 's still summer 2",
Poetry by Anni- Lorei Mainka
thank s that there is an sign from an editor / Anni- Lorei Mainka
Would you be so kind and tell me directly : what you mean with "revised"?
These poems are a part fr
on "It 's still summer 2",
Poetry by Anni- Lorei Mainka
I like it / Ileana Oana Micu
Indeed it sounds better! I would have never thought to write it in this way...I just wrote what I fe
on "Thoughts",
Poetry by Ileana Oana Micu
suggestion / Corina Gina Papouis
Hi there,
The way the text appears now is indeed a thought with all the trimmings, but not quite a
on "Thoughts",
Poetry by Ileana Oana Micu
Edit Issue / Ioana-Raluca Raducanu
Hei:) with all due respect down this page it clearly says "This is your text: You can edit this text
on "I call you Hope",
Personals by Ioana-Raluca Raducanu
Incomplete / James A Williams
This is an incomplete thought.
You've thought something but didn't quite write it all down.
on "Mother",
Poetry by Grebenisan Mihai Marian
< comments > / Corina Gina Papouis
Hi Andreea,
I found little if any sense in these at all:
And get up very hight
My heart felt
on "Pieces of a heart",
Poetry by Romila Andreea Diana
Input / James A Williams
Hi Nica. I think that with a little work this could be posted. I think it an interesting explorati
on "Battles in my mind",
Poetry by nica ioana
< comments > / Veronica Văleanu
if you use capital letters your texts will not be accepted on the main page
and there are some typo
on "EVERY ME FROM EVERY BODY ( for tinalouise's-my god is better than your god)",
Poetry by Laurentiu Ivanel
i will think about it / Anca Roshu
and I will try to change something.
you probably don't know, but i don't write poems with rhyme. th
on "purple",
Personals by Anca True
welcome / Veronica Văleanu
welcome new member
sure, I got the whole picture/ but this literary community's rule require that e
on "One",
Poetry by Laurentiu Ivanel
a few ideas / James A Williams
Hi Bianca.
I tend to write prose, but as a native English speaker I see why this is in the work
on "Happy for your hell",
Poetry by Bianca Dejanu
rhyme / James A Williams
When you get back to this, first try getting rid of the rhyme. I have nothing against rhyme per se,
on "purple",
Personals by Anca True
< comments > / Veronica Văleanu
I have a strange sensation about this text, I don't know why. In spite of all the things that need i
on "One",
Poetry by Laurentiu Ivanel
Hemingway / James A Williams
This is a good start. Please do rid it of your abbreviations, they just don't work, though I'm sure
on "Decision",
Personals by Orha Maria Valeria
James / James A Williams
Free youself!
on "Flip over",
Poetry by mia isabela deleanu
Thank you very much for your precious piece of advice, however I am afraid I am / mia isabela deleanu
Thank you very much for your precious piece of advice, however I am afraid I am a prisoner of the rh
on "Flip over",
Poetry by mia isabela deleanu
throw the ballast / ion a
i think James is right, right now rhyme and fixed form are just constraints for you, many other vers
on "Flip over",
Poetry by mia isabela deleanu
No Rhyme / James A Williams
Try it without rhyming
on "Flip over",
Poetry by mia isabela deleanu
Swear it / James A Williams
This is somewhat juvenile. It may be because English is your second language and or you may be young
on "Swear It",
Personals by Orha Maria Valeria
revise, revise, revise / James A Williams
Too many trite sayings. Try rewriting using original wording and you may really have something here
on "Lust",
Personals by Orha Maria Valeria
I'm sure that you can make this stronger / James A Williams
This has the feel of a beginner. Try saying the same thing without rhyme and use the fewest words p
on "Awake",
Personals by Orha Maria Valeria
You're doing well, you just need more practice and guidance. / James A Williams
Your English is quite good for a second language and you clearly have a good grasp of English gramma
on "A MARVELLOUS DAY WITH HANNAH MONTANA",
Prose by radulescu cristina
Revise, revise, revise / James A Williams
Needs much revision. There are spelling errors and incomplete thoughts. It has the feel of a first
on "1805",
Prose by Florin Casota
< comments > / Orha Maria Valeria
Happy new year! to you too :)
on "The beginning of a beautiful friendship",
Personals by Orha Maria Valeria
< comments > / Jeflea Norma,Diana
..Not quite a poem, is it Diana? :)
No it isn't, Miss, but I am back here to stay and improve my p
on "New Year with Buble.",
Poetry by Jeflea Norma,Diana
< comments > / Corina Gina Papouis
..not quite a poem, is it Diana?:)
on "New Year with Buble.",
Poetry by Jeflea Norma,Diana